Ocean cries heard;
eyes close tightly,
washing away healing.
Fresh wounds
bleed crimson,
night sky.
Shadowing
dim moon
with it’s pain.
Light spirits kiss,
glows into it’s heart
beauty earth once taught.
Filling ocean’s garden,
enchanting music
uplifting within it’s soul.
Passion, never-ending
friendship.
A contest entry
- Decisions Have Been Made. No Questions/ No Answers. ENTER TO WIN. by PassionsPromise.
5701 points, ended December 27, 2008, 35 entries
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wow
I loved your poem - worthy of gold - I had a different take on it from the others who commented. I simply saw it as friendship's platonic passion causing the ectasy of life's most treasured
moments.
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Thank you so much for beautiful comment, and happy smily men
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i really like passion never-ending friendship- thats a lovely line nice poem- best of luck in the contest
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Only
Only lovers for a night? But oh what a night I would think. A bit of a mystery write that has me wondering .
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love the title. beautiful words you have put together here. the last line is my favorite. it really sums the whole thought up. thanks for this. i really enjoyed it.
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Well DOne
This is a most enchanting poem and moves like music, you are a true weaver of poetry, love John
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Wonderfully penned poet.
Good luck to you
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