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Inspiration for Me

It shouldn't be this hard
to find inspiration
'cause today
my inspiration
lies in God alone, okay?

It isn't that hard
to find inspiration
'caues today
my inspiration
lies in God alone, Okay?

..cause yoooouuuuuuu
set me free
and washed me clean!
you pick me up
when i'm feelin' down
you're amazing!

and that's enough inspiration for me.

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Written January 18th, 2004

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  • Onfire4Jesus
    September 1, 2004
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    The inspiration we get is an inspiration we'll never forget.
    We receive a love so pure and True and it leads us straight to You.
    You have molded us and created us into the image we are
    We continue to pray to you and at night look up to the stars.
    We know He looks down upon us, His children are we,
    For it is the day we all await, when we will be with Him in eternity!! This just keeps on bringing words to my mind by reading your poetry. You have very well written talent in here and a great love for God that I totally admire!! Keep it up!! God Bless You!!

  • welbis
    January 31, 2004
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    this is great - i wish i could hear the tune ... the theme is perfect as saab and magnetic stars said

    keep writing, cos its always awesome, God bless you xxx

  • tiberriver256
    January 28, 2004
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    good

    huh okay. kinda interesting never read anything like it. But it was okay i thought. good write

  • Magnetic Stars
    January 28, 2004
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    "Ain't that the truth." God is our inspiration and He speaks amazingly though us when we can't do it ourselves. It's amazing how much He really does for us, and blesses us when we aren't being too stuburn to accept it. This is a great poem and I think that Christians everywhere need to remember that God is our inspiration, our hope, our strength, our everything.

    Your bro,
    Matt


  • Saab
    January 27, 2004
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    Irish was right, it WAS interesting, but I think that the theme was incredible!! I like that idea "why can't i find inspiration? Look at the world around me, look at the beauty and splendor the Lord has shown me this morning" along with the fact of course that He lives within us and washed us clean to be pure from all sin and iniquity... Thats enough inspiration for me, too. Incredible write! Very inspiring God bless -Saab

  • Irishfreckles87
    January 27, 2004
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    interesting. short, wasn't quite too sure what it was about though... I liked the repition of :' cause today...' But it was interesting....

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