Having a great hair day
Every lock in proper place
Hoping they will stay that way
Having a great hair day
Definitely will not swing and sway
And disrupt this crowning grace
Having a great hair day
Every lock in proper place
Author notes
Option. Picture 3.
In a list
A contest entry
- Humour in Nature - Contest Two by AnnD.
1000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh very well written. I very much appreciate the form and you have written well to the image.
I love the phrase you use 'this crowning grace' as it says far more than the words themselves.
I really enjoyed. Thankyou for entering.
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Nice and tightly formed. I hadn't seen that, yet now I look at the picture again it seems so obvious, well done.
Cyber (Paul)
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so sweet...loved it!
fun contest to warm our hearts!
ears/well done poet!
and by the way...those pepperoni treats..you ate for
whew! really froze our parts!
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Great little write Loved the form Good luck in the contest
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Very cute! Wouldn't it be awesome if we had days like that all the time? :-)
Great job with this one, and good luck in your contest!
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This is great. I am so used to "bad hair days" My favourite line was "And disrupt this CROWNING GRACE" I really like that expression you created
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