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What Goes Around

Do you know what you’ve done to her
Do you even care
How can you smile and live your life
Pretending she’s not there

You were everything to her
You were all she had
How could you go and act like that
And treat her so bad

How dare you stand and walk so tall
And hold your head up high
How dare you be so happy
While she wanted to die

Don’t you even care at all
Don’t you give a damn
You made her cry and made her bleed
And made her fall for your scam

You’ll feel all her pain someday
If it’s the last thing I do
I’ll find a way to make you pay
For all you’ve put her through

Author notes

There's actually a story to this *gasp*
A very good friend of mine keeps getting hurt by someone close to her and it just pisses me off. She's a wonderful person and shouldn't be treated like this and it just makes me want to go and smack some sence into the idiot who has the nerve to hurt her.

What can I say, I'm a protective friend.

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  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    October 20, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry & best of luck!