Blood in my backseat
The whore was in heat
Break her face with such malice
Force my way inside her orifices
A crimson ooze my only lubricant
I shall rip apart her cunt
Beat her spine until I hear it crack and pop
I know it's sick but I can't stop
My love and lust of the dead
I need fresh corpses to give me head
Necrophilia and lust
I will bust a nut inside her guts
Bone saws and trash bags
Leave no trace of this night
Burn her corpse in her yard
Give her parents fright
My twisted lust is fulfilled for a moment
and then it's back to the hunt
I'll stalk a new young thing
one with out any brains
Invite her to my car and start the atrocities again
Necrophilia and lust
I must have fresh dead cunts
And so as you hear my words
And you feel the chill pass down your spine
Don't fret it'll be over soon
So as you feel my blade at your throat
And my hand on your breasts
Now that you wont live to see the real terror
Necrophilia and lust......
Author notes
Option 1: Lord Abortion by Cradle of Filth....Best inspiration for dark and brutal. To any one reading this.... I do not really have a necrophiliac lust. It's a poem from a serial killer and rapist's point of view. I thought I'd try something new out for this contest.
A contest entry
- Just in Time For October by realism-vs-romance.
525 points, ended November 13, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Dude, haha i thoroughly enjoyed this, if you get a chance i have one on a necrophagist.
Great use of imagery, and you made me feel like i was in the car with this dude.
just awesome great job
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wow
this fits dark and origional! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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Wow.
Its very graphic.
I LOVE IT.
My favorite lines: Bone saws and trash bags
Leave no trace of this night
Burn her corpse in her yard
Give her parents fright
The only error I saw was a small typo:
And so as you her my words
that should be hear
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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