Watch carefully as I slip away
Ill drift back to the forgotten
Leaving a trail of memories
I'll shift back to reality
Where I seem to be forgotten
A name written in chalk
Is so easily swept away
A life drawn in pencil
Can be so easily erased
Friendships written in stone
Can only stand the test of time
Yet, we watch as their swept away
The thing we once knew
Are no more, we all went a different direction.
Day to day things never change
The days turn to months
Ive long been forgetting
And Ive long been becoming forgotten.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like the imagery of how different ways of writing things determine how long they last. I think it is best to etch your friend upon the tree trunk or inside the heart to keep them there forever.
Enjoyed your poem.
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''watch carefully as i slip away''....i love that line?!
i like this it really works! well done keep up the good work
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oh wow I really like this one, so true
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