secrets my pillow confide
through the keyhole of time
beyond the caustic tears cried
pepper scenes orient
gourmet dreams prepared of mind
elegant visions rise
attract the clock to unwind
sunshine through terrace skies
Author notes
Used all words from both word banks
A contest entry
- Word Bank Quickie by Polaja.
1200 points, ended October 19, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a nicely constructed poem ... the imagery of the clock unwinding was my favorite line of the poem
well done - and thank you for your entry!
Keep writing
Polly
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SO SWEET!!!!!
Those evenings we lie down to sleep with sad thoughts and feelings and after the tears we find our dreams take us to places where all of this is missing and only happy and fun times are found.
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then the alarm clock rings and the sunshines bringing you back to reality, sigh.
Thank you Kevin for stopping by and commenting on my poem, I really appreciate it.
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