In the beginning
you were there
in my belly.
I would rub it
and you would kick
and I knew you were there.
In the middle
I held you in my arms.
Saw your little toes
and fingers.
Counted each and every one
and was proud
to say that you were mine.
In the end
I watched
as they covered you with rock.
Buried you in the cold
dark earth.
The tears came then
and I
heart-broken
left you
alone.
In the cold.
Author notes
I got this picture I believe from google.
In a list
A contest entry
- It's Time To Say Goodbye by Cannonsfire.
3700 points, ended November 1, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awww this is really really sad and I love the way you ended the poem, truly beautiful x
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This made me want to cry, my heart just dropped... beautifully written


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What a heartwrenching piece. Tugs at my heart and leaves a lump in my throat. Beautifully penned. Good luck in the contest!
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The death of anything is hard but the goodbyes a mother says to a child rips the soul from you. I am sorry for your loss.
C





