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broken

My heart cant take much more of this
I am bruised and beaten
crumpled on the floor

there is no light behind these grey eyes
all hope
all love
all life
has left me
and I lay broken
depressed...

the cold ground is unwelcoming to me
my tattered and bruised heart
cracking more with every word
every sound that comes from your lips
the lips i once kissed
once cherished
once loved....

now I look up at you
from the cold unforgiving floor
as your eyes glare down
deep into my soul
penetrating my fragile heart
waiting for the final blow....

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  • Rachel Kruger
    October 18, 2008

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    Very emotional write and your pain is woven inbetween the lines. Liked your word choice for this piece.

    Hope that love will find you soon!