When love is fading,
both hearts hear the rhythm of goodbye.
No words, whatsoever
leave anybody, broken,
as no words,
are left to be spoken.
When love is fading,
both souls hear the wailing of goodbye.
No excuses need to be given
and nothing remains mistaken,
as all understanding
has been stolen.
When love is fading,
Both minds read the face of goodbye.
No expression goes unnoticed
when your face is fallen,
as your once beautiful life
begins to darken.
When love has finally faded
goodbye remains
just a word…
Unspoken.
A contest entry
- It's Time To Say Goodbye by Cannonsfire.
3700 points, ended November 1, 2008, 39 entries
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I like the parallel structure in your verses. Well done, good word choice.
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This breaks my heart
For love has many faces and often ones with tears some with laughter but love never truly fades if love was ever truly there .For the tears you heal the soul and work with the person to bring back the smiles and only by neglect does love truly fail. Its takes to to fall in love .Misunderstanding and no communication is often the judge and jury of most divorces
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Beautiful. I know not what else to say. Bravo my friend. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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thanks a lot! this was again spontaneous and I guess i was the first one to enter!
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and nothing remains mistaken,
as all understanding
has been stolen.
beautiful way wth words.....
good luck in life friend !
=D
Anagha-Nataraj
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Sigh...this is just so lovely and it gave me a much needed smile. Thank You. C
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