Stand up,
Speak fast,
Heart racing,
Never lasts,
After days,
Draw into nights,
Swallow pills,
Involved in fights.
Be bold,
Travel far,
Ringlet hair,
Slam on the bar,
Wasted suns,
Leads to a sticky back,
Scars run deep,
And no more Jak.
A contest entry
- Who are you... Really? by Second Dance Reborn.
1050 points, ended November 10, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What diid you think ?
Comments
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This is surely showing insistence and the patience to get things as back to normal as possible
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