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The greatest tragedy

The greatest tragedy isn’t death, nor pain, but to love in vain
Even when they burned the olive branch and killed the dove
When peace is set on fire, it ends in rain
No, the greatest tragedy is wasted love
To be afraid, and never love again.

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Sorry, no 'M's, but maybe you'll enjoy it anyway?
Well I hope so

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Guess-Who22
    October 24, 2008
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    Bah Shannon.

    All I can say is BAH. How can you love in vain when there is no such thing as love?


  • alivefromlove
    October 18, 2008
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    such a great tragedy. also a great poem! thank you for entering =)