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Make The Most Of Life

Make sure you face each day head on
don't put aside what's to be done,
time is not always on our side
let your inner spirit be your guide.

Live each day like it's your last
don't let empty minutes fly on past,
remind the ones you love each day
don't leave your thoughts in disarray.

Let your dreams take flight and soar
don't leave the skies unexplored,
dig deep and find inner certainty
reaching heights where soul's are free.

Don't ever let your sun set in pain,
this chance may never come again,
for we know not the hour or the day
when God will call our soul away.




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  • penman gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative as always. Congratulations on the bronze. It was very well deserved


  • Sandygram
    October 22, 2008

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    A beautiful poem with a wonderful message. I like the aabb rhyming. Love the ending.
    Thank you for entering this poem in my contest. This was a pleasure to read this morning. Best of luck in my contest. Take care, Sandy


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    i think all the proper virtues crop up here beautifully written .good luck


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    I think this is what I needed to read today, you spoke to my heart, lets see if it listened. Best to you in the contest


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Just what the doc ordered - motivation!

    Wishing you the best of luck in the contest!! Peace Always, Cyn


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Such a stunning write my friend. Words of wisdom beautifully written. Best of luck to you!!

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