red luscious tomatoes
cherry lips and burning desires
all consumed at the kitchen counter…
her locked-up desires
from days of drought
waiting to be peeled and consumed,
I tempt her with a bunch of roses
as they kiss and hide my growing bulge.
she trembles to my slightest touch
I try to put off the fumes
as she reaches my face with dripping hands
licking her acerbic fingers
and drawing her to my mouth
as sighs escape and amplify
building appetite for this big feast…
straps and buckles get loose
heat all over and around,
she goes down…
my mind and body, bounce
to sounds
coming from her mouth without speaking.
I can't hold my self from moaning
and bring her back, up to my lips
while her craving goes out of control…
lifting her onto the counter
she grows wilder than a beast
squirming,
moaning,
begging…
this is no moment for further
- romance
- love talk
- soft kisses or any sort of foreplay
as both of us,
uncontrollably give in to our desires
- long awaited and lustful…
going deeper and deeper
she moans her first…
then, second orgasm.
I devour,
her firm breasts,
like that one last tomato
left uncut from the interruption,
then lips...
she slips
her mouth
and kisses my neck,
leaving cherry marks and pleasured pain,
begging, screaming for more, more, more…
I can go on no more
and explode like a deadly dynamite
calming down like exorcized spirits…
then she picks a slice from the salad,
takes a bite and puts the rest in my mouth…
A contest entry
- Fuck me by sheltered.
700 points, ended October 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow!!!
Man, is this some tomato salad or what??? Sizzling, absolutely inflaming! U know 'ur words well, and u know where to use them for that lubricating effect, u know what i mean? Hehe... Fantastic imagery, very enticing description. I wish someone would offer me a half eaten tomato slice that way. Nice buddy, very very nice indeed.
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LOL! I am glad this is still being viewed!
thought I had done a bad job with this. Cool, I truly appreciate your comment. Thanks!
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thud!
Excellent presentation! I love your style...would probably love it more in your kitchen
Good luck and wow...
Love, Lane
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LOL! thanks, been my first time lol! virgin write!!! hahaha!!!
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very nice and this would have also fit perfectly in a previous contest i hosted about food and sex
very smooth style and great descriptives
thanks for sharing
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I am glad you liked it, it's the first time I have written in such a genre, read it to a friend just to make sure it was making sense. He was zapped, and so I had to explain to him that writing is only an art!!! lol!
Lencio
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Steaming!
This was so hot that you won't need an oven in your kitchen - you just steam it up. Very good imagery, pained a nice mix of good food and good sex - an association that most people find appetizing. People see food, people think sex. Now go eat you dish, Lencio.
Cheers, from your brother, Jim
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so its good eh?
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Yeah, it was!
I would never be that direct in a poem, even in the adult category. But take a look at my recent poems, you might find something titillating.
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One word! HOT!!!!!! Omg! This is amazing. Well done!! This should do VERY WELL in the contest. Good luck, not that you'd be needing it or anything though
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LOL! its the first time lol! had to read it out to a friend of mine just to make sure it was making sense! hahaha!!! thanks I hope the host at least appreciates my attempt! lol!
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Damn this is awesome!
I love the metaphors and the story that you
told here. Well done and I hope that you do
well with this write in the contest! Thanks
a lot for sharing it here!
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Thanks Jeremy, glad to know! i was checking your stuff and its not half as good as yours!!! but I do appreciate this, its my first! and maybe the last..
Lencio
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WOW!!! This is hot and I surely enjoyed this read of yours good luck in the contest!
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well Lencio ooooo oh oh yes yes yes that's it that's it oh Yes! I haven't read this side of you before, you really do need to get married lol I pity this girl, shes not getting much sleep if you have any say in it. This was one hot piece you had better call the fire brigade cause theirs some raw and sizzling pussy when your through
Hi five twin
Cyber was here
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Hahahaha!!! I said private! haha! thanks!
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This was unbelievably sensual and poetically delightful!! Great job!! I love the form of the poem!!
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Thank you for your generous comment, well this has been my first time I think to go to such an extent of writing... so I am really looking out for comments from people like you who have wrtitten stuff like this, and i did visit to check out your page. Thanks so much, I really appreciate it, and I am glad about the comment you made.
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