That book
lays beneath a stained existence
where dust has no time
to sleep
on well used intentions ~
open
and a little exposed
as the corners fall back
and the words remove dignity.
I read
every page in between
with a widespread taste
for the graphic experience unfolding
taking me
to the perfumed heights of your voice
cover to cover ~
I keep the light on
A contest entry
- Fuck me by sheltered.
700 points, ended October 23, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I liked it but I am not quite sure what it means! Sex! I peeked at the other comments.
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Excellent metaphor for an sexual encounter....loved it...
novy
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open
and a little exposed
as the corners fall back
and the words remove dignity
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This is pretty good, I also liked the title of it to, it was very creative.
Good luck in the contest, you are deserving of such.
You have good tastes.
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Well Ahem, this was a little past what I was expecting but heck you did this well. Best to you in the contest
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this is serious and i'll have to read it sober
but sounds good
poetically succinct for sure
good stuff
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Lights do add another dimension to things in this situation if You enjoy knowing where You are going
MM
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