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Let me make this clear, I want you to. .(adult)

Refracted lights slash lines,

brandishing echoes of

my curves inside your

rushing mind.

Poses of

naked bodies

battling against

one another;

fanning fevered pitches,

set up camp inside

unisoned bloodstreams.

 

Since hints of love-starved

sweethearts crying together

while making love 

under a serene moon weren't enough

to tell you what I really want,

 

let me make this clear to you; 

I want you inside of me,

I want your hardness

prying loose secrets

I've held hidden;

locked under my tongue.

 

I want you to

splay me out open wide, and

exposed as such, 

you will become my

essential element;

my final testimony.

 

Sink into my pores in

every hot breath as

your fire urges me on,

encourages me to

meet your every thrust,

impaled on you as your ultimate sacrifice,

until our movements become primal,

all thought carnal. . .

your surges inside me,

I feel their urgency, and

as you take hold of my waist,  your

roughened hands digging

into my flesh

and you drive into me,

all I can do is

battle back into you

intensely possessed;

none too gentle.

 

I whimper;

Yes baby, yes. . .

I want to feel you explode

inside of me; 

and with my thighs

locked around you,

I enable

not a drop

to

escape us.

 

Author notes

art is by Paul John Ballard, the name is Lala
Prompt:
F**k me.
No questions asked.

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • missroxanne
    November 22, 2008
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    wow. erotic but not at all sleazy. very poetic word choice.

  • mcfreeman
    November 11, 2008
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    Such a nice way to ask.....


  • poppa
    October 18, 2008

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    wow. This is highly erotic and leaves the reader panting for more. Written with elegance but heat leaps of the page


  • Blueskywonder
    October 18, 2008

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    Ooh... smokin!!
    This is an intensly passionate and hot read. Your urgency oozes temptation allover the senses of the reader. One of the best erotic i have read for its over-powering needs expressed elegatly.

    Going to be a hard one to shake off this

    Great!


  • Emperor Nerzul
    October 18, 2008
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    HOTT
  • K a t gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Holy sh..!!!! this is one hot hot hot poem.. smoking hot.. Why did you do that so early in the morning. How can I see with my monitor all melted. lol

    Excellent ... this is way way beyond that..

    good luck to both of you.

    kat


  • butterflywriter silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    WHOA!!!

    prying loose

    secrets I've held

    hidden

    under my tongue.

    PERFECT...a winner regardless of the contest. Congrats!!!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    HOLY SHIT!!

    Damn! oh my gawd! ..yeah this will make the reader lose it, l.o.l. good thing i'm perfectly under control!! l.o.l. yeah right! very hot collabo! wow!!


  • j i n gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    this is wonderful. Turned out perfect.
    Thank you,
    jin


  • sheltered
    October 18, 2008

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    this left me squirming
    damn...
    I want more
    and when your finished
    even more
    and after that
    you guessed it...
    more

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