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A Whisper from an Angel

To me your angel voice,
Brought me much comfort,
And blessings in my hard time.
 
So now I want to repay,
With offering myself,
And a family spot.
 
If you would want to be,
My caring auntie,
Then I would be so happy.
 
And read your work I already do,
Leaving comments if I can,
And keeping you in my mind.
 
A rough time we'll all have had,
But poor little Angel Anne,
Have lived a life for ten in sorrow.
 
You are so very strong,
For keeping it all together,
During all these tests in life.
 
 You will always have,
My blessings in life,
And I will keep you in mind.

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I made the BG for you, remembering you posted that photo and I didn't make a BG out of it at that time.

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Welcome my beautiful niece

    Hug*sss to you sweet niece.

    Meroza, you have penned a very heart felt write.
    Your words have brought tears to my eyes, but they are happy tears.

    Your words have spoken deeply to my soul, and have caressed my spirit with such love, lifting me to my feet.

    I can stand strong knowing that I have true loving friends, that really do care.
    Your love and caring have enriched my life, for family and friends to me, are the finest of treasures that a person can have, and are more valuable than the finest of gold.

    Sweetheart, I know I have said this before, but you truly are a beautiful angel, you have a heart of gold, so full of love and you share this with so many.
    You have the voice of an angel, I hear and feel this when I read your poems.

    Your write has touched me so deeply, and I thank you for sharing your love with me.
    We have a connection and I will never let that break, for our hearts have been tied together with ribbons of love.

    Every word touched my heart deeply.
    If I could reach through this monitor,I would tenderly hug you and give back to you, what you have given to me, and that is love and caring of another human being.

    Sweet heart,I have so much love to give, and would dearly love to share this with you.
    We can share things, inspire each other and if you need to vent some days when life gets tough or you feel down,... well, I'm always all ears, and will gladly listen.

    So with arms opened wide, it would make my heart so very happy for you to join my family.
    I'm glad to have you as my 'Niece'.
    Welcome Sweet heart!

    With deep appreciation I thank you for wanting to become a member of my family, and also for noticing my contest and taking the time to enter it.

    I would also like to thank you for making this background border for me, it truly is beautiful, as is all your work and graphics, such a talented young lady you are! and I'm so very proud of you!

    I send to you much love and happiness and look forward to getting to know you more deeply than what I already do!

    Take care Meroza, stay happy and always wear that beautiful smile of yours.
    Your Loving, Auntie Anne .



  • James R
    October 19, 2008
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    Very nice work my friend I want to adopt you.


    • Meroza
      October 19, 2008
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      Aw, what family member do you want me to be then? ^_^


  • Maxboy gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Very nice Meroza, you have shown your sensitive side here for a change. We all know the bubbly funny girl that falls off her chair so often.

    Anyone would want you in their family.


    • Meroza
      October 19, 2008
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      We'll just have to wait and see

      That reminds me, I ain't in your family yet.


  • Cynewulf
    October 18, 2008
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    This seems to be a very sad poem. The background is very good. Good luck in the contest.

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