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Honest Lust

Fuck me...please.
Let my needful ego
be at ease.

Enfold me in your
eager thighs,
make me moan in ecstasy
and blast the skies
with primal passion.

Fuck me with fervour,
with honest lust: such
openness will never lose
its touch--
or cease to be the fashion.

Please...fuck me.
Let your animal heat
enter me

and bring me sweet relief.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    there is such a feeling of...desperation...here.
    As if you can't stand it for one second longer to
    be without her, in her. Very well done Love, Lane


  • WolfHeart
    October 18, 2008

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    Lust shown as the powerful force it is. Well presented piece of adult poetry. I find I increasingly become drawn to your work. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Honest lust...yes indeed...that is seared across the screen.

    Especially liked primal passion...earthy...powerful

    "openess will never lose its touch or go out of fashion" Lovely phraseology


    I am inspired to check out the contest after reading your dance with honest lust!


  • sheltered
    October 18, 2008

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    I have one of those for sure...
    needful ego that is
    this is good up until the end
    which just doesn't sound
    like it's over to me?