This love of ours has sparked a flame
with in the chambers of my heart.
This love of ours I will always let
it shine and embrace me through life.
This love of ours no one can take away
from us because you own my heart.
This love of ours keeps us going in
this wacky crazy reality we call life.
This love of ours was meant to be
because you baby light a fire deep with in me.
This love of ours will always be here
because you and me belong with each other.
This love of ours has created a bond
that can withstand any and all attacks.
This love of ours ignites passion with in us
that has never been felt or experienced before.
This love of ours will unite us till the end of our lives
and we enter the next realm hand in hand together.
This love of ours will only continue to blossom
till it envelopes us into a safe haven.
This love of ours can not be measured with words
because only the actions we create empowers our love.
This love of ours will forever continue to grow
because me and you baby are a tag team for life.
This love of ours.....
Author notes
For anyone who might have figured this little write out its a love poem obviously and it is dedicated to the love of my life simply known to me as Sweetems and I Love You so much baby. the poem is based off the song This Love - Pantera BUT I did not even come close to how that song is sung and likewise the lyrics of the song. Infact below is the actual song and what I merely did was make my own heartfelt version of a poem from the title of the song 
Lyrics for This Love - Pantera
If ever words were spoken
Painful and untrue
I said I loved but I lied
In my life
All I wanted
Was the keeping
Of someone like you
As it turns out
Deeper within me
Love was twisted and pointed at you
Never ending pain, quickly ending life --
(Chorus) You keep this love, thing, child, toy
You keep this love, fist, scar, break
You keep this love
I'd been the tempting one
Stole her from herself
This gift in pain
Her pain was life
And sometimes I feel so sorry
I regret this the hurting of you
But you make me so unhappy
I'd take my life and leave love with you
I'd kill myself for you, I'd kill you for myself --
(Chorus)
No more head trips
I wrote this from my heart! I Love You Sweetems with all my heart!
Comments
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Wow. All i can say is that i wish all people on earth could know love like this. Your style is much different to alot of people's on here and that makes it unique and uplifting to see.
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A never ending story but only very short 4-letter word, no ....... L-O-V-E ?
But ... truly people in love sees only happy ending for their own story.
Very beautiful piece for the one you love, smokin.
summer51
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Good
My fav verse:
This love of ours can not be measured with words
because only the actions we create empowers our love.
Nice job here, and I appreciate you sharing this link with me.
Actions do speal louder than any words can ever.
Good write, peace. Timothy
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Awww...so cute! <3
Raw, and original (which is refreshing with all these cliche love poems). Good ending
Wonderfully done
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You really have a gift when it comes to love poetry. You pull the reader in from the first word, and then just take them along the ride of such a sweet love. Very well written
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Beautiful words
that share beautiful feelings conveying your deepest feelings of love. Wonderful love to share, makes dismal days happy ones.
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thanks very much for the comment as always my friend I wrote this from my heart and she loved it
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I am glad.
I am glad for you that you have a love in your life. I think the poem is very sentimental and sweet. It is pleasant to read.
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thank you for the comment I sincerely appreciat eit very much. she is my world and without her I would be lost once again. thanks again
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this is a sweet poem. good write. you love must feel very loved.
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thanks for the comment sweetie I very much appreciate you taking the time to comment love has many different ways of affecting us and for me writing poetry is one of the best ways for me to express my love to LostVampireAngel my girlfriend
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:D :D :D :D
nobody can resist chocolate...
nobody.
let alone a smokin hot white tiger
that WUD B EFFNG AWESOME!
:] :] :] :]
much love,
oldschool
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rolling on the floor laughing my ass off @ this comment from ya bro. mmm I couldn't ay that would be true but I get whatcha mean and well mmm yeah she can't get enough of me likewise I can not get enough of her so in reality we were made for eahc other. thanks very much for the comment though =)
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this is a very beautiful poem i love it a lot it comes from the heart thats what i like about it i love the whole thing nothing to complain about love it stay sic stay true and peace out
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thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem to my beautiful lover girl. what can I say other than I love her with all of my heart and would do anything to be with her right now but that will have to wait till summer of 2009. any ways thanks again and take care
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awww your so sweet! this is an amazing poem, you should write more! your amazing at it! Seriously this is beautiful and I love it so much!
all my love
kitty xxx ps love you -
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glad you love the poem my love. you have really hit me alot in a very good way to the point my muse has awoken and it yearns to express its love from my heart. thanks very much for always taking the time to comment on my writes to you I love you with all of my heart and will do anything and everything to have you smile and be truly happy because you are my world
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Nice and romantic, simply beautiful.
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thanks sis for the comment I deeply appreciate you taking the time to read my write and comment its always been said that different people express their love in different ways and my way is to write poetry
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A nice, romantic and heartfelt piece.
This is a deeply touching piece of prose, Tiger. You're both lucky to have found each other. Take hold and keep holding on.
Bravo
'D'
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thanks bro for the comment. I appreciate you always taking the time to comment on my writes likewise I always take the time to enjoy your poetry as well. love is expressed in many different ways forms ect. and my way was through poetry that flowed from my heart,. thanks again & take care.
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