Neon flashing lights
music pulsing from the ground-
Saturday youth
What did you think?
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Hood Wink!
Apologies for the late hood wink!
I really like this Haiku, it's been awhile since I've read some; this gives imagery and a beat at the same time
Great!
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Hood-Winked!
This is a great snapshot of the party-crowd youth you have done well to capture so much in such a short write - this definitely has impact! The last line for me was amazing - it had that "ah-ha" moment where it pulled the rest of the poem into a framework well done!
Keep writing
Polly
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Hoodwinked!
Yes, the weekend, time to rock and roll. Crank up the volume and feel the vibes...life is good!
I like this abbreviated poem that stirs the imagination, easy to relate to for sure.
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic bandits today because WE CARE! Write on my friend!
Dennis
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Very Nice
This takes me bakc to the good ole days when I was a youngster myself in my teens that is ( im 25 1/2 now ) but any ways it just made me remember the good ole days of youth group when we would always have fun friday nights and hang out at the ole church and just have a blast. anyw ays nice write all round =)
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