thoughts embraced around you
I felt thirsty
the more I cringe for you
the more intense it became
I dreamed
have you in my arms
you are crawling over my body
hissing as harmless cobra
my hands rolling all over
I feel your skin,
smooth and tender
all before fore play
before final act,
you groaning in pain
added to that dim
We melted into one
our hearts dissolving two
when I woke up
you went away though,
through doors of my eye lids
like that light into open
Author notes
Prompt
Fuck
A contest entry
- Fuck me by sheltered.
700 points, ended October 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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a great poem dad good luck in the contest


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this was really turning me on
but all the crap about me leaving
was a little disturbing... lmao




