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Sublime

thoughts embraced around you
I felt thirsty
the more I cringe for you
the more intense it became

I dreamed
have you in my arms
you are crawling over my body
hissing as harmless cobra
my hands rolling all over
I feel your skin,
smooth and tender
all before fore play
before final act,

you groaning in pain
added to that dim
We melted into one
our hearts dissolving two

when I woke up
you went away though,
through doors of my eye lids
like that light into open

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  • maralisa silver member
    October 18, 2008
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    a great poem dad good luck in the contest


  • sheltered
    October 18, 2008

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    this was really turning me on
    but all the crap about me leaving
    was a little disturbing... lmao