I remember watching you both
walking along hand in hand
she was but a fledgling
learning to fly
but for different reasons
you were sending
vibrations of wisdom
from your worn hands
into her tiny palms
she was but a fledgling
Author notes
50 words or less
Mariana
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Both taking small steps... marvelous. So touching. Hope you are well.
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Thank you my friend. I am debating whether I need to go to A&E. I seem to be getting worse.
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Let me know how you are doing... A&E. hmmm. Attention and Examination?
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A&E - Accident and Emergency. LOL
I didn't go because I have an aversion to hospitals. I will see how the next few days pan out. Thanks for asking.
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Wow, this piece is very well done I love the imagery involved and it has quite the story to it. It offered a slight mix of emotions, both happy and a little sad. Great poem!
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a good poem, ah such is the way of the world, as one journey nears its end another just begins - family i think of here, the love in generations.
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I enjoyed reading this very much.
I felt that the last four lines realy made the poem.
wisdom from your woren hands . A powerful statement. I would like to see this written without the limitation of words.
Thank you for your entry.
ED.
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I enjoyed this, but it does not pertain to any of the prompts.
Thank you for your entry, though.
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Very touching write, there is a lot of wisdom in those old worn hands. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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lovely little write you have here. And I just love what it has to say. Good job in writing this. I also love the picture. It definitely adds a whole lot to the poem itself. Also, thanks for sharing this lovely write with all of us and thanks for entering it into my contest. This one definitely deserves some trophies in my opinion.
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Touching work......you are up against some really great writes......love the Theme you have brouhgt to me......cherish this write, as it is a great message......God bless you!
Bear ~
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passing on wisdom and precious love
what more is needed.
lovely vision you have created
God bless my friend...
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You paint a serene picture.young and old giving a purpose to each other, Ros
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Thank You!..
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