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Pretty In Pink

Visions in pink

dancing in waters so blue

enchanting stories

whirled within thoughts

 

Pleasantry bestowed

upon glass thickened hearts

creating purest of memories

declaring positivity

 

One kiss placed

upon the skin so soft

whilst basking

in ones own self glory

 

Creativity escalating

as decadence fades

into pure bliss

upon ones purest kiss

Author notes

The Whisper by manips-of-artist2 <== NOTE: if you do not do this you will be DQ'd !!

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    November 6, 2008
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    oops. somethign went wrong. My favorite part was

    One kiss placed

    upon the skin so soft

    whilst basking

    in ones own self glory

  • The Hardest Goodbye
    November 6, 2008

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    I don't know if anyone has told you this or not, But this poem is amazingly wonderful. My favorite part os when you said "

    Love it !


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    A gentle and uplifting piece. Such warmth felt while reading, wonderfully penned. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    How beautifully soft...lovely flow with such a peaceful feel which touches the heart and makes one feel light and uplifted...well done!
    Best to you...
    mystic


  • badnovocaine
    October 19, 2008

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    WHOA! This is amazingly beautiful and it has a little bit of elegance added into the poem.
    When I was reading this piece, it rolled off my tongue nicely, so its a very well written piece.
    Good luck to you in the contest.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    Simply stunning, you do well with your word choice and I am left in your wake. Best to you in this contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Very softly done.. had a very uplifting feel to it. Ahh for such a pure kiss!


  • WolfHeart
    October 18, 2008
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    Soft and languid poetry that bleeds from the picture in perfect harmony. You did a fine job here!


  • PoeticAlien gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    beautiful words.


    • Asylaarix
      October 18, 2008
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      Thank you so much! Your comment is appreciated.

      Much Luv & Respect!
      TT

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