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Season's Soul

The season has come alive.
A thinking, breathing, moving mess.
Deep within the confusion sits a center.
Grounding this insanity into singular awareness.
Flickering hues,
  Golden yellow
  Burnt orange
  Scarlet red
The themes of a season,
Melting into different colors.
Solemn as they fall to the ground.
The season’s soul apparent,
Complex intricacies,
Brought to light through a falling leaf.

Author notes

Autumns Soul. Inspired by my screen name... which is in turn inspired by my name Autumn

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  • sunoir
    October 26, 2008
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    Baring oneself to life

    beautiful name ... beautiful nick


  • sheltered
    October 19, 2008
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    beautiful name
    beautiful season
    beautiful write