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xx--The Signs--xx

 

Please just let me be,

In a world of my own,

Why cant you just see,

The signs that I have shown,

Im drowning in blood pools,

From cuts that I have made,

With secret sharp tools,

One of wich a blade,

Ive written little things,

Explaining how I feel,

While wishing I had wings,

So I didnt have to deal,

With pain built up inside,

Kept in there so long,

I really cant confide,

It just feels so wrong,

Ive written lengthy rhymes,

None of wich make sense,

Describing hurtful times,

While putting up a fence,

To keep anyone from knowing,

The pain in my mind,

Im good at not showing,

Emotion of any kind,

No one knows that im unstable,

And the things that bug me deeply,

As I sit at the dinner table,

Picking at food sheeply,

Tonight my life will end,

Now dont you wish you paid attention,

My final message I will send,

On your level of comprehension,

Now you see that I was hurting,

The pain I couldnt bear,

With death I had been flirting,

I guess you didnt care...

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  • shypoet89
    April 15

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    wow i loved this poem.... i can relate to it very much..... you did an awesome job... it is so true though people need to learn to read the signs great job..... if you could please tell me what you think about my poem its called with everyday that passes that would be great thanks


  • leander Moderators member
    November 30, 2008

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    You did quite a good job with the poem, though it is a tad bit longer than what I was looking for.
    Thank you for entering!
    Leander