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Vengeance


Dark thoughts
grow inside me
vengeance touches my world
my mind becomes a bloody knife
I kill


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Contest Prompt
Cinquain Poetry

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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 22, 2008
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    Hello

     

     

    Aesthetics are a tad off in L 2....message is dark and pondering......not expecting such a write......but, you did well.....it won't win, but I shall not censor your work either......thank you so much for coming out & supporting this contest.....I like your talent....I hope you join me again.....God bless you!

     

     

     

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