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such a sister (not for judging)

 

you’re smart and you’re beautiful

inside and out, you glow

with spunk and luck and goodness

as on with life you go

 

you’re past 70 now, so what

you’ve not slowed much through the years

just jump on your bike or your roller skates

take a tumble while you hold back the tears

 

a mother, a grandma, you fit the bill

giving hugs and kisses galore

surrounded by family and friends

who could ask for anything more

 

you’re a pal, a comrade, a friend

an exceptional woman by far

but you’re the one and only gal

such a sister you are

 

so happy birthday, sis

enjoy the gifts of love you get

take the whacks in stride this year

may it be your best birthday yet

 

for my sister darlene

on her big 70th

happy birthday with love

 

dee garner

© October 15, 2008

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For my dear sister, Darlene on her 70th birthday.
You can find her poetry and stories at

www.allpoetry.com/j%20aime%20coudre

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  • Thor-201
    March 26
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    Isn't that just a beautiful tribute to your sister. It made me smile.


    • catz Moderators member
      March 26

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      Thank you... and she really is a wonderful sister. She's 70 now and I'm 71, I can't begin to tell you how much it means to have the close relationship we have had all these years. She's interesting, fun, understanding and always enjoying whatever projects she's into. I just wish we lived closer, she's in Florida and I'm in Arizona but we do get to see each other when we get a chance to visit back and forth, just always a long time between visits.

      Now I bet that's a lot more infornation than you expected or wanted

      Dee


  • Shakari
    March 23

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    Awwww...What a beautiful tribute to your sister?! I loved this piece because it seemed so personal and from the heart, which is where the best words are stored. You captured the essence of her personality, or at least, rewrote it for your readers to appreciate. Happy birthday to your sister and keep up the great writing!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 27, 2008

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    Hood Wink!

    What a lovely poem for a dear sister
    Just lots of smiles for this one


    Stay safe
    ~Manda
    (Apologies for late Hood-Wink!)


  • Ellis gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY to Darlene!

    Terrific write for your sister, Darlene.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    excellent~

    What a beautiful tribute for your sister
    Love this sis and the background too..
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Rubee
    November 10, 2008

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    What a beautiful tribute to your sister... this is so darling. Hope she had a great birthday!!! Awesome background too

    • catz Moderators member
      November 10, 2008
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      Yes, she had a nice birthday. She and her husband live in Florida and we went to visit them for three weeks, which included her birthday. It was all fun, the visit, the birthday, the relaxing... and I ate alligator meat... delicious

      Nice to see you again, when the heck are you going to start posting again ???

      Love and
      Dee


  • Sarah957
    November 9, 2008

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    Ths is wonderful! A sister is a friend for life who knows exactly who you really are and loves you for it. Such a treasure is one that should be cherished and protected and i can see that you are doing that. I hope she had a great b day!


  • leo2
    November 1, 2008

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    I'm sorry I'm late and missed the celebration but wanted to add my very best wishes to you and your sister. May your years always be a cause to celebrate.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Mary O gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    What a loving and thoughtful tribute to your sister. Well done Cats.
    My belated congrats and well wishes to Darlene as well. Happy Birthday!
    ~Mary O


  • gaze
    October 20, 2008

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    I came and read it before but wasn't logged in I think and didn't comment, but what I felt when I read it for the 1st time and now, is that great and gratifying love that only sisters can provide.
    I have four, and love them immensely.
    Reading your poem made me smile, it's beautiful!


  • piccolo
    October 19, 2008

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    What a loving expression. Yes, it indeed must be nice to have a family that loves and supports each other. (Too many of us have come from battleground states.)
    Best wishes to you both.


  • Yemassee gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    Ah to have a sibling write something about me that didn't include the words, "Idiot, jerk and poophead!" Oh, but we are a loving family! lol

    So this is nice to see, just to be reminded that there are normal folk out there!

    I will also wish her a happy birthday (mainly just so she'll share some of the cake with me.)


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    Oh MY! Thank you so very much for this beautiful poem...much love to you also and may we have many more birthdays to celebrate...maybe even together


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    A glowing description
    with peeks at Darlene's
    adventurous nature,
    a tribute as only
    a sister could create.

    M-C

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