I the fact that you get crazy insane
over stupid randomness,
I hate you for believing things that aren't true,
I hate that i found myself saying sorry
to you a thousand times for
nothing
I hate that you're insecure,
I hate how you SAY you care for me , but somehow
i never get the feeling you do.
I hate you for making me laugh, but making me cry,
I hate how your attitude turns angel to devil
in blink of an eye,
I hate the way you always smile,but frown underneath,
i never know what you're feeling.
I hate how you never let your guard down,
how do you expect someone to get close to you?
I hate The way you push me aside when things get rough,
why wont you just let me in?
I hate how you believe other people over me.
And the thing i hate the MOST is the way
you make me LOVE you.
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Yeah i love him, oh well.... Whatcha think?
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great poem. i know what it feels like to love someone but hate them for making u love them... complicated crap. thanks for the entry!
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Very nice!
Your score,
64/66
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i think you wrote what was in your heart irregardless, and that is always what to do, great job!!!
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Better..
Sorry for the negative feedback. I don't believe in coddling people. If someone didn't like my poem or whatev Id want to know, so yea.
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This sounds a lot like '7 things' by Miley Cyrus. This is not necessarily a good thing. You repeated a lot of lines from the song. It's the same theme and very similar wording. I think fixing the punctuation & grammar would make it better, but on the whole I just don't like it. Sorry.
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Okay i changed the whole poem,
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Sorry you didn't like it..
On my defense i have never heard the song.
I might have to change it up a bit for the sake of people thinking that i did copy her song. Even though i didn't. Man i so hope people don't think that. WOw!*sighs*
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