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What if, What now...

They say that the eyes are the window to the soul,

What if your eyes are burnt from seeing the true reason for living,

Blinded from looking at your self and wishing for something else,

Permanently shut so you dont have to believe that you are stuck in reality no matter how hard you dream for death and for it all to end,


What then,

Does it come to your brain,

What if your brain is withered from the daily stress of life,

Unstable from your derranged mind,

Depressed and re-pressed every day at the hands of the ones you trusted most,

What about now,

Do it lead to your mouth,

What if your mouth is stained with lies,

Your teeth rotten from the desire to be thin,

Your tongue dry from dehydration of your overworked body,

What now,

Does it lead to your stomach,

What if your stomach is empty from the ever so recent pressure to look like a lamp post,

What if your stomach is worn from your constant pill popping sessions driven by the sheer hatered of life itself,

What next,

Does it come to a screetching halt at your wrists,

What if they are colored red from your lack of feeling,

Scarred from the past,

Bandaged by the same hands that will destroy them the next day,

What about after that,

Your feet,

The over depended upon and forgotten basis of human survival,

What if they are burnt from walking in the depths of hell,

Damaged from dancing with the devil himself,

Twisted from flirting with death as it daily knocks on the door,

What is left after that,

Nothing,

Nothing at all,

You by this point have no soul,

You are an empty shell,

A waste of space,

Forced to stay until death do's us part from this miserable jail cell known as life,

If you made it this far then you get to join me in the devils dominion,

His secret cove where he keeps the soul less worthless nothings until we waste away from starvation or suicide,

Doomed to dwell in hell's fire for all eternity,

Where peace and hope are long lost forgotten and forbidden memories...

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  • genelle40
    March 13
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    I love this work, it just kind of kept pulling me in further