So happy that I found
my true serenity.
So happy that I realized
the beauty that's within.
So happy that I found
a better side of me.
So happy that I realize
a better life will now begin.
So happy I'm awake
for now I own my life.
So happy that I came to find
the meaning of what's true.
So hafpy I can deal
much better with my strife.
So happy that I came to find
that I am better without you.
So happy tears have dried
no longer needing tissues.
So happy that I'm now releasing
all the ties that bind.
So happy I responsible
no longer for your issues.
So happy that I'm now releasing
pointless stresses on my mind.
Author notes
I don't know, I was sitting here and I felt like writing a poem. Theory Of A Deadman's So Happy came on the radio, and I ran with it from there.
I guess I should accept the fact that quality is better than quantity, but I was dying to write something. I think it's a good premiss but I'm open to suggestions. I'm tired, my mind isn't functioning as well poetically, but I had to write. It's an addiction.
Share with me your interpretations.
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It makes me happy just knowing that you are happier now. And finding serenity and peace within oneself is almost has important as finding acceptance. Those three things like to hide inside us I think. Anyways.. all things considered you are definitely coming out on top and will be the better person for it in the end. Knowing its not your mess to clean anymore leaves you free to ... make a little mess yourself. (if you know what I mean) Anyways... great write!
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i hope you really are happier Shadow youve been through alot and i hope it gets better real soon. I dont want you to be all optomistic and everything i just want you to be okay. I can deal with okay. Great write
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Hahaha, thanks.
Well I guess the best thing for me to do for you is to clear up a couple things. I am optimistic but I'm not blinded by a pseudo hapiness. Yes, it is true, I am at peace with myself and with my existance. I'm not someone who will deny that there are trials and situations in life that one must overcome. People say "believe" and everything will be perfect." I say believe in yourself and thus get the courage to stand up for yourself, thus attaining the serenity that you so deserve.
Something that more counselors should tell their clients.
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Well this is really good. A love it. It's happy and that is the most important thing.
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Well... Um... I guess you could say that.
I'm not saying that I'm not content, but this poem is reflecting on a cynical sense of hapiness. I ran with the song, and wrote the emotion provoked.
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