At last!

"Dance" without your heart in anger

and the truth shall give you sight

for you to step into another world

that carries no shade of night.

The air calms the thickest clouds

while time stands a ~Peaceful still

its all done with the lightest touch

showing the love of Gods good will.

Faith holds trust in those who believe

quicker than you can begin to sigh

taking you to the most beautiful place

where you'll never have to say good-bye.

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Treasures in Heaven or on Earth by Poetess12. 1200 points, ended August 7, 2009, 14 entries
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Poetess12
August 7, 2009
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I love the rhyme and flow of your poem. There is a good message to it also.

Thank you very much for your entry.
LadyDementia
October 22, 2008

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Such a tranquil air to this, beautifully penned with superb rhyme. A very good read. Thanks for entering and good luck
Disturbed Prodigy
October 21, 2008

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there is something hidden in these words that sparks life in a person and so much more, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
kiwigirljacks
October 18, 2008
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Oh to go to such a place... this had a very serene feel to it that uplifts the soul!
Jeremy0826
October 17, 2008

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That's awesome bro!
I love your thought and creativeness
with this prompt. Such beautiful words
you have written here. Good luck to you
my friend and thanks a lot for sharing it!

Jeremy0826