Let me drown in the sea of your
tumultuous passions, so deeply
drowned that my clutch is weak
on a shore I do not want to attain.
There is nothing sweeter than the
salt of your kisses giving me joy.
Nothing dearer than lying next
to you, enchantment laves my being.
Tremulous fingers explore . . .
melting heart gasps for breath.
Your tongue, my lifeline to reality
as you explore my warm depths.
Love me to a state of insanity.
Love me to the edge of a hot universe
where lovers are free to tangle in
heaps of exploding spume.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by ennovy.
700 points, ended October 31, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great metaphors and good imagery, your write brought many thoughts to my mind. Good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering.
Novy & Brazos -
Sensuous imagery! IYour use of metaphors all through made this an exceptional write!
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This yet another good read....I like how you used the metaphor's about passion.......Thank you for entering our contest...Novy & Brazos
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