I’m going on vacation.
It’s over when I land.
Wake me when we get there.
But talking now is banned.
Fleeting flights of fantasy
Are my adamant demand.
The airline’s called “a story.”
The ticket’s in my hand.
A contest entry
- Cheer Me Up In Rhyme by piccola.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm gunna give you points for your poems! by SmartBrick.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 67 entries
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Comments
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I agree with Piccola. It is very clever in a few brilliant stanza's.Very nice!
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this is cute. It is short and ver clever. It left me wondering what the story would be ... or even several stories. Nice job thank you for entering
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Nice write... short simple and clever!
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