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where the dolphins play

she plunks herself into an easy chair and thinks

how easy it would be to drift off

to where tin soldiers of her sleep exist

 

the clock is ticking and the kids are still awake

hopped up on jelly beans and air that isn't fresh

 

the man with the broken hands hovers

like a vulture

for his nightly feed

she grunts some

 

indiscernible lingo 

drags her sorry ass

into the kitchen

 

if only she could 

 

light upon a porch somewhere

below the eaves of moonlit skies

where there is shelter

and place her priceless gold there

 

but in the real world 

and with a little polished pine

she finds her way back home

 

where the precious gems are

truly prized

 

 

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    I really thoroughly enjoyed this, it is living and real.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    uhh mm.
    Great piece here.
    WIshing you the best hon


    Passions