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Cinquain Stars

are you
the shooting star
that I saw fall last night
looking through my bedroom window
for light




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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Ahhh....nice job...... a tad cliche' in word choice......but very serene and imagery is lovely.....message is tender and gives me a *sighing* moment......nice job

     

    Good luck & God bless you!

     

     

     

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