My fingers touch your empty heart
Unspoken words of who thou art
Trembling pulses make me shiver
As down towards my soul they quiver
Don’t hurry now, relax and sigh
You know you need this just as I
Ecstasy will bring you pleasure
As our emotions rise together
I will fill those empty spaces
And take you to exotic places
Emotions will be soaring high
You and I will reach the sky
Tumbling softly to the ground
Then up again in feelings found
Ebbing from our secret places
While taking joy from our embraces
When all emotions have been sought
And both have all the pleasure caught
We lay us back and feel the peace
Oh! what wonder, what release
Now silently we lay and ponder
Feeling calm and feeling wonder
If only life could be this fine
And we could feel this all the time
Jenny Lloyd
Author notes
I read rules.
A contest entry
- Sensuality In Verse by Deceits Tears.
1200 points, ended October 20, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sex and Candy by GypsyEyes.
600 points, ended December 8, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Twist Me. Seduce Me. Entice Me. by SheWasPreternatural.
900 points, ended December 4, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your most personal & meaningful poem from ( 2008 ) by justgot2loveme.
1500 points, ended December 11, 2008, 52 entries
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450 points, ended December 17, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything and every thing by Black Rose Reaper.
466 points, ended December 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the rhyme in this, it's so natural and flows beautifully =) Awesome write =)
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Very good
I loved it
I like the ryming in it
it is very very good
Thank you for entering
Kitty23 -
It usre would be very nice to always feel this good and enjoy love. Excellent flow, great job.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Justgot2loveme
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oh yeah i know that feeling...just laying there wishing it could last...-sigh- well done thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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a beautiful poem
a beautiful poem -
This piece just flowed It was such a pleasure from the start to the end
Thankyou for your entry
Good luck
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