she loves
without restraint
trailing splendor behind
for all who wish serenity
peace dove
Author notes
A formal Cinquain 2-4-6-8-2
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A contest entry
- 'Come Celebrate My Two Year Anniversary on AP With Me!!' by Cynthia Gaines.
2000 points, ended November 8, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful job on the cinquain. It is up lifting and gives the reader a feeling of tranquility. thank you for the entry.
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I can never write a poem that requires any kind of set format, its beyond me. I do love this though, very heartwarming, something that isn't dark and depressive for a change. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thank you for everything, and for being a friend/sister/mentor!!!
Hi Kim, I really appreciate your very thoughtful poem's message, and I'm glad you entered this heart-warming piece in my two-year anniversary contest!! 
You are an angel on earth!! 
"There is nothing on this earth more to be prized then friendship" ~Saint Thomas Aquinas Peace, Cyn 
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Mmmm.....delicious in message and two invisible commas are all this needed ......great job!
Aesthetics are just a tad off in L 3.....but other than that......lovely Cinquain.....I wish you the best in this contest.....God bless you Kim!
Bear ~
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Beautiful
The style the flow the beauty of the Peace Dove
Wonderfully written
Love and
Your Spider Pet
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I like this one. It gives me a sense of peaceful contentment. It is a very pleasureable poem to read.
Mike -
Perfect! You really did stick to the formal form:
Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.
I'm impressed!
Love,
Amera♥
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