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Contemporary movement

Missing image

Rainbow tipped illusions
drift,

in lazy waves,
coating all that surveys~


Multi- hued graphics,
painted in stubborn relief,
tiptoe,

in archaic fashion~


Bold strokes ignite canvassed
stares,
oiled,

to perfection~


Caught,

in the updraft,
wrapped tightly,

within the passionate appeal
of release,
she daubs.

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  • Valerien Raven
    March 26
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    Very good full of imagery.


  • Lowell Poe
    March 10
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    Very good lass...
    the picture is very strange ....
    you would have to be good to come up with such a fine piece for such an obscure photo.
    You should be proud little gypsy...
    your imagination and your raw talent has brought it to life.

    Blessings lass,
    Lowell Poe.


  • untouched pages
    February 4

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    I found this to be a little dark.... but still very full of life at the same time. This is the work of a great poet. I found the last stanza to speak so much in such few words!!

    ""Caught,
    in the updraft,
    wrapped tightly,
    within the passionate appeal
    of release,
    she daubs.""

    This right here speaks for its self... I can't say anything more about it that would give it the proper credit it deserves.....


  • Heroesrox silver member
    January 29

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    You seem to have a unique way of writing and I really, really like that! Keep it up and don't stop whatever it is you are doing! Awesome piece and thanks for sharing it with us here at Allpoetry!!!!


  • Fixing Tomorrow
    December 15, 2008

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    The picture and the poem definitely go hand in hand with each other! The way you write is exquisite. I love the way you took painting and made it even more artistic than it already is! This is very creative and almost mischievous.


    • cutiepie gold member
      December 16, 2008
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      Many thanks for your kindness, delighted that you enjoyed it


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Humm..I felt that someone is wandering to the remote of the self and describing the hidden sentiments to define this life..isn't..?..poetic touch of the lines are remarkable..love it..


  • biggdoggspaz5000
    October 17, 2008

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    i thought it was very intresting i love it nothing bad to say hear i love it keep writting and peace stay sic and stay true peace out

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