I gave you something important
...I told you not to break it, or throw it away..
I gave you something special...I never knew I'd regret it one day.
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It was in a box, on the outside it read 'handle with care'
I wish you could've seen your face
All I could do was stare.
(It was hard to open, but it finally gave way)
This wasn't easy for me...for this gift I'd given was more valuable than gold
....your response, "I'll keep this forever....I'll guard it with my soul.
Days, weeks, months...
I couldn't believe it..
I was so happy; I hadn't shed one single tear.
I awake one day and nothing seems to be right...
Here we go ...I hear a knock on the door
I wouln't be able to sleep that night
I open the door and there you stand holding my box.
I look down and can't believe my eyes...
What happened to you guarding it with your soul??? You didn't have to lie....
For there before me is what's left of my box
And the once precious gift....
I take it into my hand , and what's left...falls apart
I drop to my knees, crying....
Trying to my up what's left of my heart.....
Author notes
I know it sucks....but so does the way I feel.....
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This poem does the exact opposite of suck!!!! you are an amazing writer. I can feel the emotion pouring through each word, and can only imagine how you must be feeling.
"If time were to heal all, let time pass as quickly as heaven will allow. For every moment you are in pain, is another moment I wish would not exist".
<3 keep your head held high, as corny as it sounds, things do get better. just wait and see, I promise.
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thank you <3
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It doesn't suck hun, I think it's really good.
I mean, you could have made this really cliche but instead it was very original.
Great write.
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