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A Cause for Debate

Missing image
Man's Evolution
from Saline Solution
debated throughout time.

Are we a chance incarnation
or spawned from Eden's creation
by the hand of God Divine?

Theology?
Ecology?
Intelligent Design?

Theories are stated
and hotly debated--
N'er an answer do we find!

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by ennovy

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  • Brazos silver member
    October 23, 2008

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    I liked the thoughtfulness of your write, and I loved the rhyme! Well done...good luck in the contest and thank you for entering.

    Novy & Brazos


  • ennovy silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    This excellent spoken word...plus it gives a view of the picture........Thank you for entering our contest...Novy & Brazos


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Very good

    Excellent write(the prompt reminds me of the final scene in "Planet of the Apes" Hmm? Either way your poem resurrects that age-old question, one to which there will never be a solid final answer, methinks. Deserving


  • maralisa silver member
    October 18, 2008
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    a brilliant take on the promt good luck inthe contest


  • Commodore Rouge
    October 17, 2008

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    Oh, powerful! I love poetry that makes you think, but not usually the kind where they reader is asking several questions. This piece though, it didn't feel like you were just rattling off questions and calling it poetry, it felt like you were showing a whole new side to an argument through word choice and rhyme and just plain . . . creativity. I really appreciate the time you took to make this an intriguing piece, something that I thoroughly read instead of clicking onto something else! Thanks for giving me good stuff to read!!

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