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An Autumn Picnic in the Park



Colors everywhere exploding
reds and yellows and gold
Trees are shedding their follage
As they stand so tall and bold

Cool and bubbling waters
run fast in the meadows brook
smoke curling upward in pattern
as the barbeque begins to cook

What better time for togetherness
Sharing a meal in the park
Start your day real early
and stay till comes the dark

So don't just think of picnics
when the weather is summer hot
Venture out during color time
and find that "Autumn Spot"

Mr. Doug

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    Excellent

    This is comforting and uplifting. Thank you.


  • Little Blue Bird
    October 21, 2008
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    WOW

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
    I really like the imagery.