Singin to the tones
As the beats of the music flows
Rythmics runnin through
Her body while she moves
Belting out her vocal score
Crowds of people wanting more
From the heart she's really
Musics Whore
Author notes
The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture found on google images.
A contest entry
- Prewrites by leander.
730 points, ended November 30, 2008, 142 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me anything! by ASmileForYou.
560 points, ended December 16, 2008, 134 entries
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Comments
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WOW!
Sexy sonic sounds of kool reverberate
from this sensually exotic and provocative
poem of rhythmic Blues. Nice...
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Good job! Keep writing and thanks for entering!
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I'm in love with music as well, so I definitely can relate to what you've written here...
thank you for the entry!
Leander -
Sounds familiar
the song is different but the music is the same. -
amusing!!!!
passionate, well written!... Congrats... Marvel
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so in love with the beat and the music has control...wow! this should have won! nice job and thanks for sharing
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Beautiful Background
WOW! Every word just flows beautifully as do the rhyming. The last line just made it all come together phenomenally. LOL Excellent Write. Good luck in the contest but this poem stands on it on without the need of luck. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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this is so kewl
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Great stuff here dear!
Well done and good luck to you here.
Take care!
Jeremy0826
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superb
this is great every line flows it rocks!
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good stuff
Music's whore huh? so I wonder what that makes her audience?
I LOVE THIS PIECE!!
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From the heart she's really
Musics Whore <<< very powerful line, its a short poem and short is sweet, this was...the finest sugar of short poems !! i love dance and loved this
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This poem is just as hot as the pic!!! I love the rhythm and flow of this piece!!! This poem reminds me of myself!!! Great job sis!!
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this was a twist it had the ghetto style that i so love
i so love this its a great piece to have over some fried wings and gravy
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I like the end to this, depending on how you read it (or interpret it), it's a nice twist thrown into contrast by the rest of the piece.
Good write.
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Very Cool, gurl
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