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Anniversary Reflections

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A year is the barest whisper of eternity,
and I know that's how long you will stay with me.
So I've penned these few words on this special day
for a chance to express the things I rarely say.

It's been three hundred sixty-five days since I became whole,
fifty-two weeks since I realised I had a soul.
Twelve months of letting my broken heart heal,
a year of convincing myself that this is real.

Hundreds of wonderful nights spent together,
and they stretch out before us into forever.
Countless hugs and kisses, endless tumbing into bed,
and I still remember every "I love you" you've ever said.

You're my true love, my soulmate, and you have my heart,
there's no force on Earth that could tear us apart.
So I'm writing this poem just to make sure you knew...
our love is forever; that fact remains true.

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  • rinzurajan
    June 27

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    WOW...A THOUGHTFUL POEM...

    DONE REALY BEAUTIFULLY...

    GOOD LUCK...


  • Kira65
    June 25

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    This is a great poem, i could really feel the love in the poem! it is shown in a great way
    Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • Borntowriteforever
    June 18

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    Judge's Verdict

    Such as passionate and heartfelt poem. Your love is shown through this lovely write. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • Fallen-Muse
    June 18

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    This is so beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. What a lucky significant other you have. Thanks for your entry and good luck!!


  • angelfalls.silently
    May 14

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    pretty

    gooooood! thanks for commenting mine. i didnt really like it! theres no force on earth that could tear us apart. beautiful! you are a lovely writerLaughing


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    May 10

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    This is beautiful, if only everyone would write something like this for the one they love. Gorgeous. Congratulations on your bronze


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 9

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    Just gorgeous indeed! It's wonderful to read such passionate poems and to know that when true love is found, it is recognised
    This has excellent rhyme and flow.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • TwiztidMaggot
    May 5

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    You did a very nice job writing this piece. Keep up your amazing work!!

    CrimsonViper


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 5
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    Beautifully written. Thanx 4 entering. Good luck. - cgirl0410


  • karma-n-peace
    March 5

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    Wow, a true loves dedication.
    You definately have a talent for expressing your love for your husband, sounds like you have an amazing relationship.
    The flow of this smooth and the imagery is most loving.
    Thank you for entering


  • Emotional-wreck
    February 12
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    And I still remember every "I love you" you've ever said.
    This is beautiful but i asked to put ur option in ur authors notes


  • DecorusApparatus
    November 8, 2008

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    Awwww!

    This is about my brother! Oh the joyness. Good luck for this comp Margie, you're awesome!!

    I won't enter now, I cant win if you're in it!!


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautifully spoken entry, Josie


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 28, 2008

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    I love it. Rhyming was amazing, the poem just captivated me from beginning to end. I can relate to this so much and I think that is why it really grabbed my attention. Brilliant. Thank you for entering and good luck.

    Take care


  • fake-or-real-smile
    October 23, 2008
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    Hehe I adore this!!!!

    Made me smile and it flows amazingly.

    I'm so glad you have found something so special.

    Good luck, thanks for entering and well done!

    x.x.x


  • Girl Mad As Birds
    October 19, 2008
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    Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! Dude, that's so awesome


  • Travel Notes
    October 17, 2008

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    This captured me right off from the first line that is pure brilliance.

    A year is the barest whisper of eternity,

    The rhythem is smooth and consistant, and the imagery is heartfelt. Thank you for entering, and best of luck.

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