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Authentic (Cinquain)

~*~

staying
true to oneself
means to be authentic 

a believer in right from wrong  

always

~*~

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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Hello

     

    Nice....Lovely Presentation as well ~

     

     

    Aesthetics are very nice......Form is true.......message is wise and well-chosen.....good luck & God bless you!

     

     

     

    Bear ~


  • chatelaine
    October 19, 2008
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    Profound values are built on such virtues!
    Enjoyable and uplifting


  • Cannonsfire
    October 17, 2008

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    True words here, one must always stay true to what thay believe in. C


  • sheltered
    October 17, 2008

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    very nice message and flow
    I hope you can get
    line three a little smaller
    for that perfect form
    great stuff

    • nevadapoet
      October 17, 2008
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      Please will you also read lost hope????


    • nevadapoet
      October 17, 2008
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      thank you thank you...oh sure, I'll just change that third line to make it fit better...lol ( that little project took me an hour and 27 revisions)...but I agree it needed work and it got it...I think this works better. Thanks for the read.
      Shelly

      • sheltered
        October 17, 2008
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        actually did you try being on the top line?


        • nevadapoet
          October 17, 2008
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          No, I didn't, but it works perfectly so I changed it...This is now a collab piece...thanks for the help!!!

          • sheltered
            October 17, 2008
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            or maybe even "staying" cause its longer yet.... lol

          • sheltered
            October 17, 2008
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            just a suggestion
            it's your piece


            • nevadapoet
              October 17, 2008
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              no offense...I really do appreciate your comments and suggestions...I worked the revisions on all the other lines to fix line three and never even considered line one...being works much better and now it is perfect. Thank you thank you!!!
              Shelly

      • sheltered
        October 17, 2008
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        I gotta say you really did get it...
        perfect

      • sheltered
        October 17, 2008
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        lol

        • nevadapoet
          October 17, 2008
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          practice does make perfect...I do appreciate you here.
          Shelly


  • JustADutchie gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    Such a true statement, wrapped in a beautiful form.

    ~Titia~

    • nevadapoet
      October 17, 2008
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      thank you thank you....I appreciate the read and welcome comments
      Shelly

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