~*~
staying
true to oneself
means to be authentic
a believer in right from wrong
always
~*~
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVIII - by Bear - by Arkbear.
825 points, ended October 22, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hello
Nice....Lovely Presentation as well ~
Aesthetics are very nice......Form is true.......message is wise and well-chosen.....good luck & God bless you!
Bear ~
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Profound values are built on such virtues!
Enjoyable and uplifting
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True words here, one must always stay true to what thay believe in.
C
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True to oneself and the form...Thanks lady.
Shelly
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very nice message and flow
I hope you can get
line three a little smaller
for that perfect form
great stuff
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Please will you also read lost hope????
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thank you thank you...oh sure, I'll just change that third line to make it fit better...lol ( that little project took me an hour and 27 revisions)...but I agree it needed work and it got it...I think this works better. Thanks for the read.
Shelly -
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actually did you try being on the top line?
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No, I didn't, but it works perfectly so I changed it...This is now a collab piece...thanks for the help!!!
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or maybe even "staying" cause its longer yet.... lol
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you are a dear...I changed it...what do you think?
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also changed yourself to oneself in line two????
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now that really is perfect i think
even sounds better
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you are a funny man...anyone ever tell you that?
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well i have a feeling it will be better
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just a suggestion
it's your piece -
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no offense...I really do appreciate your comments and suggestions...I worked the revisions on all the other lines to fix line three and never even considered line one...being works much better and now it is perfect. Thank you thank you!!!
Shelly
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I gotta say you really did get it...
perfect -
lol
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practice does make perfect...I do appreciate you here.
Shelly
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Such a true statement, wrapped in a beautiful form.
~Titia~
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thank you thank you....I appreciate the read and welcome comments
Shelly
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