what should
first be pondered
then humbly prayed upon
is forever in the fool's heart
written
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVIII - by Bear - by Arkbear.
825 points, ended October 22, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ah sometimes fools (all of us) rush in and let the pen's ink stain the heart, but ink can be removed. a good poem.
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thank you-it's good to hear from you...peace
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Beautiful every word is true and something to think about.
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thank you Rheea
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Hello Michael
Hard to get good aesthetics with such a long 1st L.....but, you managed it quite well
Not sure why you wrote, *fools*?
But.....nice job.....not sure it will win Gold.....but I do appreciate your efforts as always.....God bless you!
Bear ~
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beautifully said.
good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful and true.
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