~*~
one man
standing beside
one woman wondering
why two cents adds up to only
one way
~*~
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVIII - by Bear - by Arkbear.
825 points, ended October 22, 2008, 18 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Hey Bro.....aesthetics are flawless.......message is strong and makes me read it a few times to grasp all of its' core meaning.....lovely job......good luck & God bless you!
Brother Bear ~
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Good stuff
...comes in small containers, Grasshopper
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This is the equation of 'man makes, woman takes' age old theory proved time and again.
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wise glasshopper
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lol Yes surprisingly I make good sense considering the amount of red wine I drank last night and the headache I have now lol...oh and make no mistake...no glasshopper here just a sensei...lol I earned the right to be teacher at this stage
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I never wondered *LOL*
two thumbs up...think they call that financial gain
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tres interesante
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of course the man and women
could be switched around
but i'll blame it on the form... lol
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Nice one timmy! good luck to ya,
Alex.
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Love it, very nice and perfect shape too.
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excellent
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