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The Back Seat Of My Head

matter
grey if you like
reboots jumps into gear
but what difference does it make
little

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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Flow is a tad choppy.......aesthetics are perfect.....message is pondering.....nice job

     

    Good luck and God bless you!

     

     

    Bear ~


  • JustADutchie gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    Very few things really matter when one gets down to basic. Love it, nice shape too.

    ~Titia~


  • Floorboards
    October 17, 2008

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    Hey, Mac! this is really good! matters little, very clever, nice to see you've actually got off your arse and written something,

    bravo!

    Alex.