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All That

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You can always find one
hanging around the pool
staring at the women
his chin wet with drool .

A disgusting sort of fellow
who really thinks he’s hot
believing that he’s all that
when he’s really not.

Just to gaze upon him
will bring your eyes to pain
lets pull the plug in the pool
and flush him down the drain

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6. Dick head

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  • This was a very amusing piece you have here, It was very well written. Keep up the good work. Thanks for entering an best of luck too you in tha contest.


  • Ami
    June 21

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    haha nice I've seen a few of those type guys >_<
    Dick head is the right title for them


  • echo-ink
    February 10

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    hehehehehe
    the slick-dick picture was so funny, I think I would have written something a little naughtier,
    Good job, lmho


  • smonte19124 gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    OMG I can't believe I didn't recognize the shape of his head right away. This is a hilarious write perfect for the prompt and picture. You should have won. Great job, God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Oh I know these dickheads!!
    Well done and thank you for your entry in my contest.


    Delila


  • Still Standing gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Very cute and funny

    You did the prompt very well with no cursing...Kudos..I love it and that guy in the pool has a dickhead for a head literally which makes this even more funny. GOOD LUCK!!1


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    hahaha....funny stuff ya got here. I like this, so if you insult someone through poetry is it still an insult? haha


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    Too funny and very fitting to the picture and your chosen prompt
    Good luck in this contest

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