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To Feel....

To feel alone
in a messed up world
to feel unloved
to feel no trust
walking around
head hanging low
trying to work out
where really is home?
To see only anger
behind shadowed eyes
to see them talking
but only hear lies

To feel suffocated
by an empty space
smothered by lack of faith
laying in bed
tear stained face
feeling dirty
ugly
ashamed

To feel this
nearly everyday
and still hold back
from slipping ways.

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  • sneakers
    October 18, 2008
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    great.

    this is really great i like the way it flowed. keep up the good work.