~*~
Waiting.
wondering
should I leave
unsure of how
I feel.
I think
I love you,
that I want
to be with you
still fear creeps in.
Can I be
the woman
you want of me
while not loosing
the real me!
My face
hidden
my hair
covering
the tears
I spill
confused,
still
I'm
here
waiting for you!
~*~
Author notes
This is in the shape of a woman!
This picture was my influence:
http://iardacil.deviantart.com/art/Sanctuary-for-All-100889747
A contest entry
- Quickie Anyone?? by AngelKat42.
980 points, ended October 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This reminds me of myself in some period not long gone. I liked the third stanza, it was so reflecting and I am sure many people can relate to it in one way or another. Nicely done, I like your format.
~Noor
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you did an outstanding job with the prompt. the form is excellent. I can relate to this poem in many ways. I've had similar thoughts before about this.
one thing there is a word limit. 30 - 60 words. I've counted three times you are over by 3.. not a big deal but just wanted you to be aware. my thoughts on that is whatever inspiration you got from this prompt is what's the most important. please don't pull this out.. keep it right here.
good luck
kat
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dig the out lay well done
a well flowing poem with words of depiction to mach.
i wish you all the best in the contest , as i believe it deserves a plc. keep up the good work. -
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I appreciate your kind comment.
Rose
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